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:iconoliviousolitaire:
Hello / Good evening
Your photo is beautiful and deserves to be criticized. I hope you enjoy my review and do not bother too much.
Here we go.

:pointr: Aestheticism

Coter aesthetic, I find your fabulous photo, unfortunately I find it unfortunate that on the lower part of the picture the shadow of the person hiding a little chair, you lose a little something.

:pointr: Originality

I think the idea of contrasts woman / man is really a good idea, we feel attended by me at the end of a love story between two characters, and the we feel like a regret from the male character and too long waiting for the female character. Moreover, the idea of putting the lady over the man is really a good idea.

:pointr: Technical

Regarding the technical implementation from the problem of the shadow on the bottom of the chair already raised above, I do not see much to say.

:pointr: Conclusion

I think your really beautiful photograph. I applaud you and congratulate you again.

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:iconguitardedak:
I couldn't decided which one I liked more. This one, or "Too Late." They are both lovely. They both tell a story, and they're both beautifully done.

There are obviously two aspects to this photo. More if you really think about it. But two major ones. One is the photo its self. It's amazing. The lighting is perfect! I love the area you chose to take the photo in as well. It adds more to it and the color choice of the flower really makes it pop. Nicely done.

The other aspect is the story. Lovely. It's hard to find photos that inspire me..and believe me. This one does. Not only do you understand what is going on right away but it makes you think. Even though you can't see the faces you can tell what expression they have, which is what I like the most. Finally, title is PERFECT!

I can't wait to see more from you. Nice job.
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:iconwintersouls:
Amazing! :)

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:iconmphilipphotography:
im glad you like it :)

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:iconwintersouls:
I really did! ^^

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:iconmphilipphotography:
:flowerpot:
i just thought these photos would mean so much more if seen together

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:iconwintersouls:
Yeah, it really created the mood :)

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:iconjuicycinnamon:
Wow...it's great...I'm amazed :heart:

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:iconhissora:
This is my absolute favorite of yours. Just down right wonderful.

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:iconmphilipphotography:
i al so glad you like it
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:iconmphilipphotography:
wow, really?
what makes you like it so much?

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:iconhissora:
Yeah.
It has like a story to it, in a way. Like I see it as a girl goes to an old abandoned place to meet her love, only to not find him. Years later, the boy she was to meet comes and finds the flower she dropped. Idk, maybe it's just my huge imagination or something XP

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