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The way you captured him looking down at the rose and his clothes look as if he slept in them, gives the impression he has been traveling or slept in the car.
I see a young man with dreams and goals with his soulmate cut short.
I see the empty building he is inside, has not been lived in for a lonng time because the walls are tattered and torn from the elements of weather and time.
I feel it is a lost loved due to death and he is back in a place he may of met her or where they planned to grow old together.
I feel he came back here to give her a rose in rememberence or on a aniversary.
I also feel he has grieved for her for a long time and he is about to start living again and even though he loved her, he knows she wants him to go on and with that, he has finally decided to go back and say good bye with one red rose.
I like photos that give the viewer so many stories and also have emotion like this one.
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I really like this, it leaves me thinking about all the stories that could be placed into it. Like the setting, what was that place used for? And why would there be a man there holding a rose? Looking somewhat sad. It is a beautiful image to look at.

There are some parts of the photo that could be improved (if you were to ever retake it) like there being a little more space between the top of the head and the window frame, as its perhaps a little too tight, and the rose being held a little further over to the right, so you can see the head of the flower a little better.

Also, the tie is a little too straight, as this photo shows small signs of distress it would work better if it was a little more messed up. These things are probably just me being picky anyway.

The framing within the photos frame looks good and really suits the image. Great work, it's definitly going into my favs.
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:iconattaraxie:
nice =)) lovely charecter and place=)

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thank you very much

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very atractive shot :shot:

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:D thanks

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Lindo:) e romântico**^^

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gracias

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you're too cute.

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haha thank you

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:iconpainwithdesire:
I like the contrast between the "crispness" that you give off, and the deconstructed foreground and background. It's a nice touch.

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:iconmphilipphotography:
:D im glad you caught on to that.

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November 15, 2008
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Nov 14, 2008, 3:32:14 AM

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