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November 15, 2008
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Canon
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi 1/5 second F/5.0 40 mm 200 Nov 14, 2008, 3:32:14 AM |
Critiques
I see a young man with dreams and goals with his soulmate cut short.
I see the empty building he is inside, has not been lived in for a lonng time because the walls are tattered and torn from the elements of weather and time.
I feel it is a lost loved due to death and he is back in a place he may of met her or where they planned to grow old together.
I feel he came back here to give her a rose in rememberence or on a aniversary.
I also feel he has grieved for her for a long time and he is about to start living again and even though he loved her, he knows she wants him to go on and with that, he has finally decided to go back and say good bye with one red rose.
I like photos that give the viewer so many stories and also have emotion like this one.
There are some parts of the photo that could be improved (if you were to ever retake it) like there being a little more space between the top of the head and the window frame, as its perhaps a little too tight, and the rose being held a little further over to the right, so you can see the head of the flower a little better.
Also, the tie is a little too straight, as this photo shows small signs of distress it would work better if it was a little more messed up. These things are probably just me being picky anyway.
The framing within the photos frame looks good and really suits the image. Great work, it's definitly going into my favs.
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