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©2008-2010 MPhilipPhotography
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a snap shot of a friend
shes a great artist :iconsweet-nothingness:

Critiques


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First off, the colours are gorgeous. The green grass has this blue, cold feel to it, as does the model's pale skin. The fading and shadows at the top of the photo gives the entire piece a bit of an alone feel.

I love how the model is set against the blades of grass, that she is pushing them down so that they create this interesting diagonal angle against her face. I like that the focus is beyond the grass in the foreground, so the viewer feels as if they're looking for something, and there she is!

I do, however, wish there were not so many blades obstructing her face. The grass on her chin sort of chops some of the flow of the piece. Her left arm is a bit awkwardly obstructed as well.

Looking at the photo right ride up (horizontally, that is) gives a different expression to the model. Rotates this way, she is a bit forlorn. There's a tenseness in her jaw that, were it released, would make her expression more intense but less uncomfortable.

This is all I have to say. Mind you, I'm really not a photographer in the slightest, I just attempt to give as much constructive feedback as I can! <3
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:iconmphilipphotography:
that she is

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...even though people have been in love before me, it makes not my love's kiss less sweet [link]
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:iconicecoffe:
locul imi place mult...iar poza exprima melancolie si putina tristete! dar in acelasi timp parca se gandeste la ceva frumos,sau la cineva...!imi place expresia ei!
:iconmphilipphotography:
esti prea fel

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...even though people have been in love before me, it makes not my love's kiss less sweet [link]
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:iconicecoffe:
imi place cum vorbesti romaneste!si plus ca e codificat!:)ma gandeam ca aseara te-am deranjat si nu mai vrei sa vorbesti cu mine!:)
:iconmphilipphotography:
i bucura de a conversa cu tine. este un proces destul de haha

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...even though people have been in love before me, it makes not my love's kiss less sweet [link]
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:iconicecoffe:
daca nu te superi te-as ruga sa imi scri fraza asta in engleza sa inteleg exact la ce te referi ca"e un proces destul de haha"...pls!
:iconmphilipphotography:
Nu am nici o idee ceea ce cerem, dar cred cã am spus ca i vorbesc cu tine

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...even though people have been in love before me, it makes not my love's kiss less sweet [link]
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:iconicecoffe:
ok...i dont't understand if it's good for you that you talk to me or not!tha't what i'm asking!...PS.i now that is a very sad day there in america today!:)
:iconmphilipphotography:
i enjoy talking to you.
and yes it is a very sad day here

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...even though people have been in love before me, it makes not my love's kiss less sweet [link]
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Details

August 29, 2008
1.9 MB
140 KB
600×900

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Camera Data

Canon
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi
1/200 second
F/10.0
55 mm
400
Jun 18, 2008, 4:56:01 AM

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