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August 29, 2008
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Canon
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi 1/200 second F/10.0 55 mm 400 Jun 18, 2008, 4:56:01 AM |
Critiques
I love how the model is set against the blades of grass, that she is pushing them down so that they create this interesting diagonal angle against her face. I like that the focus is beyond the grass in the foreground, so the viewer feels as if they're looking for something, and there she is!
I do, however, wish there were not so many blades obstructing her face. The grass on her chin sort of chops some of the flow of the piece. Her left arm is a bit awkwardly obstructed as well.
Looking at the photo right ride up (horizontally, that is) gives a different expression to the model. Rotates this way, she is a bit forlorn. There's a tenseness in her jaw that, were it released, would make her expression more intense but less uncomfortable.
This is all I have to say. Mind you, I'm really not a photographer in the slightest, I just attempt to give as much constructive feedback as I can! <3
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